That time someone pointed out my book's last chapter had zero payoff
I was in a tiny book club in Portland about 6 months ago, and we were discussing this thriller I wrote myself. Thought I had this killer twist where the main character just walks away from everything at the end. One member, this older guy named Dave, said flat out 'your ending feels like you gave up on your own story.' He explained that the whole book built up this mystery about a missing kid, and then the final chapter just had the detective sit on a park bench and think about the weather. I honestly thought I was being artistic or deep. But he was right. The readers wanted some kind of resolution, even if it was messy. So I rewrote the whole last 20 pages to actually show what happened to the kid through a recovered diary entry. Now when people read it, they actually feel satisfied instead of confused. Has anyone else had a beta reader or friend give feedback that totally changed how you finish a story?