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A beta reader told me my fantasy world felt empty, so I made a simple change
I was getting feedback on a story draft from a friend, and she said, 'Your main city is just a name on a map, I can't feel it.' That hit me hard. The next day, I made a list of three specific, small details for every location, like 'the baker always burns his first loaf' or 'the bridge has a missing plank everyone avoids.' It forced me to think about daily life there. Anyone else have a trick for making settings feel real without huge info dumps?
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stellabennett11d ago
My buddy Mike writes sci-fi. He had this space station that felt dead until he added one thing: the air recyclers hummed the same three notes, over and over. Drove the characters nuts.
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evah4011d ago
That's genius but also kind of awful. Can you imagine trying to sleep with that in the background? It would be like a broken fridge times a thousand. You'd start hearing it in your dreams.
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