Question about alternate endings for 'The Giver' - I got way too deep into one idea and it ate up my whole weekend

I was trying to write a version where Jonas and Gabriel actually make it back to the community, but the memories don't just flood back to everyone like in the book's ambiguous ending. My idea was that Jonas has to become the new Giver and slowly, carefully reintroduce memories over years, starting with just the Elders. I spent maybe 15 hours over Saturday and Sunday trying to plot out which memories he'd share first and the political fallout, like if they'd try to silence him again. It was way more complex than I thought. Has anyone else gotten stuck down a rabbit hole trying to make an alternate ending 'realistic' and have it totally blow up your time?

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simonsingh21d ago

Wasted your whole weekend because that idea breaks the book's point. The story isn't about fixing the community, it's about escaping it. Jonas bringing back memories turns him into the thing he ran from, a controller. The political fallout you plotted is exactly what the book rejects, the messy fight over power. The beauty is in the unknown, not in building a new system of rules.

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thea_knight20d ago

Wow, that's a really sharp take. I got stuck on a similar thing with a different book, trying to force a "fix" onto an ending that was meant to be open. What finally clicked for me was letting go of the need for a solved puzzle. The point is the feeling it leaves you with, not a neat answer. Sometimes the story's power is in the questions, not in building the answers for it, you know?